Wednesday, October 7, 2009

The Pitch

I'll be pitching my novel to agents at the South Carolina Writers Workshop Conference in two (count them, two!) weeks and I've been working on my logline. There are lots of great descriptions of what a logline is, like the ones here and here and here. But basically, it's that one sentence description that explains what your story is about. The word logline is more of a screenwriting term, but it clicks with me, so I use it. It's your story's hook.

And it's no time to talk about the character's "journey" or "self-discovery" or "search for self-identity." In the logline, you need facts. Get specific. What's the conflict? What's the obstacle? What happens? Oh yeah, and explain it in about 100 words or less.

Here are some posts that are helping me through the process. There are two great articles (part one and part two) from Edittorrent about how to write a logline. Also helpful is Nathan's Query Letter Mad Lib. That helps you get the gist of the story down to a few lines too.

8 comments:

  1. I'm really struggling with this. I can do it, but it doesn't sound hooky to me. Ho-hum will not do! :-)

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  2. Wow, a logline sounds even faster than an elevator pitch!

    Good luck when you go to pitch your novel.

    I hope you hit it out of the ballpark...
    Karen :0)

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  3. Linda, I have about two pages worth of drafts of loglines. It's really hard to craft that perfect sentence, isn't it? Then I have to memorize it so it rolls off my tongue at a moment's notice!

    Thanks for the good wishes Karen!

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  4. Thanks! This was all very helpful as I work on revising my YA novel and get ready to query agents.

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  5. Glad you enjoyed it scififanatic! Good luck with your query process.

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  6. Didn't know you were pitching your book at the conference. I wish I could talk to them and tell them what a fantastic writer you are. Love, Mom

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  7. I'm bookmarking this for future reference. Thanks for posting all the great links!

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  8. Hi Anna, glad you found it helpful. Thanks for stopping by!

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